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Don't try to change me,
Just love me how I am,
With my flaws and imperfections,
Come take my trembling hand.

Don't try to understand me,
Just know my heart is yours,
Although I may not show it,
I feel we'll be together for evermore.

Don't try to take my pain away,
Just share with me the burden,
Listen to the words I speak,
Don't draw the final curtain.

Don't tell me that you wont come back
Don't say you have to go,
Just feel the feelings that I feel,
And let us follow our winding road.
©2008-2009 ~Saskuto
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A poem i wrote just now ^^

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:iconjoi-joi:
That's really nice.

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thanks ^^

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I love it!:love:

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I really like it Tia, but I feel like the last line of both the second and fourth stanzas break the beautiful flow of the poem.

Great job though :D

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:iconmissca:
oh wow this is so beautiful I love this. I wish it was a picture, but then I might be brought to tears from the picture that might be painted.
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awwww :aww: thankies sis!!

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thankies! :D

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yah i thought that too... but i wont change it cos its one of those poems i wrote at the time i was feeling something in particular and i don't wanna mess with it now.

thanks and i'm glad you like it :D

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